I like your singing.
I like your singing.
This would be perfect to show my students at school, but they band New Grounds bc the naughty posts. Plz post on Youtube!
This is pretty good for a classic cartoon style based on story beats, camera, etc. However, I have a real bias for unfinished work. Perhaps try and develop a storyboard style that can really tell a story or a joke.
I understand. Thanks for the feedback! :)
But (corrrect me if I am wrong), most storyboards that I've seen also don't have too much finished panels or drawings. Anyways, this was my first try, but I do understand your point that for an animatic like this, it should have a better ending (I will say this was due to the time constraint that my teacher placed for the assignment).
Since this has 3 stars at the moment-- I voted 5 on the left box to try and balance it out. This hits that 1990's pun bone and tingles the haha in my spine. Keep up the good work :D
Great pacing, music, story beats and art.
It's good commentary on how I think a few people feel, but not enough people really feel the danger of an all smart house as well as get how laws are being geared to protect corporations over people. If you can make these points funnier to more people, you may have a hit or die a creative genius to early before his time, but your work will live on.
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